I think this found poem must have been inspired by Orlando! It is full of energy!
Andy your bat acrostic..I love it! Isn’t it amazing how much information is packed in that little poem? I love the winged mammals! Is Mackenzie your daughter : ) I love how you composed the poem with Word Art! And guess what? I am watching those delicate snowflakes fall as I view your work. What about “blanket” instead of “cover”…
I would add visuals to your Acrostic and Haiku if possible.
Excellent drafts!
I just wanted to say how how impressive your drafts are!! The concrete poem is extremely creative. I would not have thought to type the name and have the adjectives become the arms and legs. It reminded me of the books we examined in groups. You must have received wonderful inspiration.
The cloud poem included facts, yet it reads so beautifully like Sierra. You imitated the writing style so well. I liked the part about the cloud being like a “hot air balloon…”
I do wonder why you selected bats?? I really think the pictures you add will enhance your poems!!
Sonia, you did a great job on all of your poems! My favorite is the concrete poem on Mackenzie..it is precious. I also really liked your Orlando found poem.
fryeem said,
February 27, 2008 at 1:45 am
I think this found poem must have been inspired by Orlando! It is full of energy!
Andy your bat acrostic..I love it! Isn’t it amazing how much information is packed in that little poem? I love the winged mammals! Is Mackenzie your daughter : ) I love how you composed the poem with Word Art! And guess what? I am watching those delicate snowflakes fall as I view your work. What about “blanket” instead of “cover”…
I would add visuals to your Acrostic and Haiku if possible.
Excellent drafts!
Nicole Atkins said,
February 27, 2008 at 11:08 pm
I just wanted to say how how impressive your drafts are!! The concrete poem is extremely creative. I would not have thought to type the name and have the adjectives become the arms and legs. It reminded me of the books we examined in groups. You must have received wonderful inspiration.
The cloud poem included facts, yet it reads so beautifully like Sierra. You imitated the writing style so well. I liked the part about the cloud being like a “hot air balloon…”
I do wonder why you selected bats?? I really think the pictures you add will enhance your poems!!
amhall said,
February 28, 2008 at 10:29 pm
Sonia, you did a great job on all of your poems! My favorite is the concrete poem on Mackenzie..it is precious. I also really liked your Orlando found poem.